LITERACY - editing
Today you are going to edit your Room 13 writing.
Things to work on:
- check punctuation (especially for speech, looking for inverted commas, capital letters etc)
- look for words you can improve (you may want to use an online thesaurus below)
- look for anything you can add (eg, adding adjectives to nouns to create expanded noun phrases)
- use the example text below to help with ideas
Read through the 3 star text about Jane Goodall - the information about her complements your work on animals really well.
Answer the questions and use the answers to check your understanding.