Today, we would like you to improve a really rubbish piece of writing. You need to show off all of your writing skills to make this better. There won't be much of the text that you will want to keep!
The below links are exactly the same text but saved in 2 different formats. If you want to edit it using a laptop, then open the word document one, SAVE IT ON YOUR COMPUTER, then start editing.
If not, then open the pdf and write your improved version in the book.